You are as happy as you can be: your story, be it short story, novel or
novelette, is finally finished. However, when you are using real life
events as a source of inspiration, you may not always get a true-to-life
effect. Before you send your work to a publisher, first check if the
story makes sense as it does in real life.
In order to reach the final draft, you need to be tough with yourself
and cast an editor's eye over your piece. Although real life events have
their own logic, when you read your story from head to tail for the
first time you will surely notice some plotting errors. However, there
are other vital points you should check off when comparing your version
of the story to the events that inspired you.
1. Is the behavior of your characters as believable as it should be?
Bear in mind that in fiction, the people you describe rarely, if ever,
act "out of character." If your character behaves differently, you have
to be attentive to this and ask yourself whether this corresponds to a
real life pattern.
2. Do your characters relate to each other as they should? As in
real life, events in your story may influence the attitudes and emotions
your characters have towards one another. Real people would always
mention events that happened to them within the story -- make sure your
characters do, too.
3. Do your characters manifest believable reactions? If in the
same type of situation your character is once enraged and the other time
annoyed, there is something wrong. If you have a real person in mind,
you should be aware of the fact that real people are usually constant in
their reactions.
4. Do readers understand what your characters are doing at the precise time they are doing it?
You need to make clear what happens in your story, otherwise your
readers will lose the thread and your story may be lost altogether. When
transforming reality into fiction, make sure you don't forget any
relevant links, so as to avoid alienating your readers.
5. Are your characters where they should be? You may easily have a
character in two places at once if you do not control this critical
thread. Especially if you have one or several subplots at the same time,
you need to pay extra care as they can quickly spiral out of your
control.
Checking all these points will take you a lot of time, dedication and
effort. However, is you fail to make sure that your story makes sense
according to the real events, you will only manage to waste your own
time. Editors expect stories that hang together.
Copyright © Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ
About Shery: Shery is the creator of WriteSparks!™- a software that generates over 10 *million* Story Sparkers for Writers. Download WriteSparks!™ Lite for free at http://writesparks.com
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Monday, September 26, 2016
How Do Your Characters Stack Up? Using Real Life Events in Fiction Stories
Monday, September 19, 2016
Tips to Help You Find Your Writing Voice
Editors and readers alike will usually ignore the voiceless writers who
write stale, uninteresting articles. What everybody is looking for is a
fresh voice that will get readers' attention.
Basically, your voice means your style, the manner in which you're writing and you feel most comfortable writing. No one will be really able to define what a writer's voice is, but everybody knows it when they see it.
Finding your writing voice can be a difficult and complex process. Believe it or not, even the famous writers took years to find their voice. Writing courses and workshops can help writers find their voice. However, there things you can do starting right now to find your writing voice.
Here are some tips on how you can add your own voice to your written work:
1. Be original. Many new writers follow in the footsteps of the established writers they admire. This may often result in plain lack of creativity for the writer. So try to break any patterns you have by writing something original and new every time you start to create.
2. Write from the heart. If you don't feel what you write, if you are not in touch with yourself, probably your readers won't be either. You'll find your voice in the most intense moments -- when you feel like grabbing a pencil and writing away.
3. Simple is better. Many writers strive to express themselves in complicated ways. But keep it simple and write as you speak. Record yourself speaking and then compare it to your pieces.
4. Learn to edit. It is easy to be carried away once you start writing. Sometimes, you may need to cut some of the pieces you have written just to add more value to the essence. Your voice will come through if you continually distill your writing.
5. Don't listen too much to your inner critic. Your inner self could give you constructive criticisms, but it could also prevent you from finding your voice. Listen to your inner critic, but don't allow it to interfere while you're still in the writing process.
6. Be open. Learn to open yourself every time you write. Reveal your innermost desires, hopes, fears and dreams. If you feel embarrassed, perhaps it's your voice showing up.
Now that you have some ideas about how to find your voice, discovery will be a lot easier. What are you waiting for? Start writing and finding your voice!
Copyright © Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ
About Shery: Shery is the creator of WriteSparks!™- a software that generates over 10 *million* Story Sparkers for Writers. Download WriteSparks!™ Lite for free at http://writesparks.com
Basically, your voice means your style, the manner in which you're writing and you feel most comfortable writing. No one will be really able to define what a writer's voice is, but everybody knows it when they see it.
Finding your writing voice can be a difficult and complex process. Believe it or not, even the famous writers took years to find their voice. Writing courses and workshops can help writers find their voice. However, there things you can do starting right now to find your writing voice.
Here are some tips on how you can add your own voice to your written work:
1. Be original. Many new writers follow in the footsteps of the established writers they admire. This may often result in plain lack of creativity for the writer. So try to break any patterns you have by writing something original and new every time you start to create.
2. Write from the heart. If you don't feel what you write, if you are not in touch with yourself, probably your readers won't be either. You'll find your voice in the most intense moments -- when you feel like grabbing a pencil and writing away.
3. Simple is better. Many writers strive to express themselves in complicated ways. But keep it simple and write as you speak. Record yourself speaking and then compare it to your pieces.
4. Learn to edit. It is easy to be carried away once you start writing. Sometimes, you may need to cut some of the pieces you have written just to add more value to the essence. Your voice will come through if you continually distill your writing.
5. Don't listen too much to your inner critic. Your inner self could give you constructive criticisms, but it could also prevent you from finding your voice. Listen to your inner critic, but don't allow it to interfere while you're still in the writing process.
6. Be open. Learn to open yourself every time you write. Reveal your innermost desires, hopes, fears and dreams. If you feel embarrassed, perhaps it's your voice showing up.
Now that you have some ideas about how to find your voice, discovery will be a lot easier. What are you waiting for? Start writing and finding your voice!
Copyright © Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ
About Shery: Shery is the creator of WriteSparks!™- a software that generates over 10 *million* Story Sparkers for Writers. Download WriteSparks!™ Lite for free at http://writesparks.com
Monday, September 12, 2016
Thunder When the Universe Burps: A Creative Writer-cise
Nature is a wonderful inspiration for any writer. In this mini writing workshop, we'll wax some poetic prose.
First, pick a number from 1 to 7:
1. earthquake
2. sunrise
3. volcanic eruption
4. lightning
5. rainbow
6. thunder
7. hurricane
Next, create 2 lists for the natural phenomenon you chose. Brainstorm for 5-10 minutes for each list.
For List 1, brainstorm for action words associated with the natural phenomenon you picked. For instance, what do you see, hear and feel happening when it thunders?
e.g.,
List 1 (action words):
explode, clap, boom, crack, shatter, burst, break, detonate, bust, shake, reverberate, applause
For List 2, pretend you are seeing/hearing/experiencing the natural phenomenon for the first time. You don't know what could be causing it. What's causing the thunder? List all the reasons you can think of.
e.g.,
List 2 (causes):
avalanche in heaven, a million stomping feet, clouds slapping hard against each other, angels gung-ho on the drums, God drops a giant bowling ball, the sound of ants walking magnified a billion times, universe burping, a giant fist smashing through the firmament
Got your lists together? Now it's time to combine the words and ideas from the lists you generated. Create lines from the combinations. (Note: You do not have to combine exact phrases.)
e.g.,
Congratulations, you've just created your first visual poem. If you're up to it, create visual poems for the other 6 natural phenomena.
And here's a suggestion: Gather a group of friends and create your lists together. Collaborate on visual poems. You'll be pleasantly surprised with the images you'll be able to come up together. And if you're a parent, try it with your kids.
Copyright © Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ
About Shery: Shery is the creator of WriteSparks!™- a software that generates over 10 *million* Story Sparkers for Writers. Download WriteSparks!™ Lite for free at http://writesparks.com
And if you want 3 writing *sparks* delivered to you every day for 31 days, check out WriteSparks!™ Daily HERE for info on how to get started -- it's free :o) Thank you again for reading. I hope you're having a productive day/night!
First, pick a number from 1 to 7:
1. earthquake
2. sunrise
3. volcanic eruption
4. lightning
5. rainbow
6. thunder
7. hurricane
Next, create 2 lists for the natural phenomenon you chose. Brainstorm for 5-10 minutes for each list.
For List 1, brainstorm for action words associated with the natural phenomenon you picked. For instance, what do you see, hear and feel happening when it thunders?
e.g.,
List 1 (action words):
explode, clap, boom, crack, shatter, burst, break, detonate, bust, shake, reverberate, applause
For List 2, pretend you are seeing/hearing/experiencing the natural phenomenon for the first time. You don't know what could be causing it. What's causing the thunder? List all the reasons you can think of.
e.g.,
List 2 (causes):
avalanche in heaven, a million stomping feet, clouds slapping hard against each other, angels gung-ho on the drums, God drops a giant bowling ball, the sound of ants walking magnified a billion times, universe burping, a giant fist smashing through the firmament
Got your lists together? Now it's time to combine the words and ideas from the lists you generated. Create lines from the combinations. (Note: You do not have to combine exact phrases.)
e.g.,
A million stomping feet shake the heavens.Leave your list for a bit -- an hour, a few hours, a day or so -- and then come back to it and revise. Revise until you're satisfied with the lines and images.
The sound of ants walking a million times magnified.
Clouds detonate to begin an avalanche in the sky.
God drops His giant bowling ball and strikes.
Clap, applause! The angels are gung-ho on the drums.
A giant fist smashes the horizon.
Break the firmament with the universe's booming burps.
Congratulations, you've just created your first visual poem. If you're up to it, create visual poems for the other 6 natural phenomena.
And here's a suggestion: Gather a group of friends and create your lists together. Collaborate on visual poems. You'll be pleasantly surprised with the images you'll be able to come up together. And if you're a parent, try it with your kids.
Copyright © Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ
About Shery: Shery is the creator of WriteSparks!™- a software that generates over 10 *million* Story Sparkers for Writers. Download WriteSparks!™ Lite for free at http://writesparks.com
And if you want 3 writing *sparks* delivered to you every day for 31 days, check out WriteSparks!™ Daily HERE for info on how to get started -- it's free :o) Thank you again for reading. I hope you're having a productive day/night!
Wednesday, February 20, 2013
20 Questions with Author Jack Remick
Jack Remick is a poet, short story writer and
novelist. In 2012, Coffeetown Press published the first two volumes of Jack’s
California Quartet series, The
Deification and Valley Boy. The
final two volumes will be released in 2013: The
Book of Changes and Trio of Lost
Souls. Blood, A Novel was
published by Camel Press, an imprint of Coffeetown Press, in 2011.
ISBN: 978-1-60381-147-7
Could you tell us a little bit more about
yourself?
I’m a novelist, a poet, a short
story writer, a screenwriter. I’ve been a musician (piano, violin,
composition), a bus driver, a social worker, a university instructor. I speak a
couple of languages other than English. Early on, I traveled a lot but now I
don’t like to get too far from home. Home is the room I write in. I’ve spent a
lot of time in Latin America. It turns out that a lot of my writing focuses on
South American themes and ideas. My latest novel, Gabriela and The Widow features a 19 year old Mexican woman who
takes the hard trip to El Norte where she becomes the caregiver for a 92 year
old widow.
Describe your desk/workspace.
It’s a mess. It is always a mess.
When I finish a novel or book I try to clean up some of the muck, but I look at
each paper and tell myself that I know where it is and if I file it, I lose it. So
I don’t file it. There are stacks of print-outs and copies of finished work. On
the desk there are three computers, two printers, two backup drives (I’m
obsessive about saving files so have never lost a byte…) and a separate flash
drive for storing each project. I guess
you’d call it “creative chaos”. The
value of computers is that everything there is orderly. Everything is defined
and easy to find so I don’t worry about the physical chaos. In this, computers
are salvation. But be sure to keep a couple of external backup drives…you never
know.
Do you have a favorite quote?
“When not writing I get weird.”
What are you currently reading?
In the last few months I’ve been
engrossed in the new erotica that women writers are pumping out. There’s a real
revolution going on there—women taking control of the language, taking control
of their sex lives, rebelling against all the “don’t does” of prim and proper.
I just read “Sex and Death in the American Novel” by Sarah Martinez. I just
read a couple of Madison Montgomery’s erotic novelettes with her sexy
protagonist, Virginia Templeton. On the other side, I’m reading older Don
DeLillo novels such as Falling Man.
There’s a lot to learn from DeLillo. It’s hard to stay current. I also continue
to read in the heavy world of C.S. Peirce, Carl Jung, and Claude Levi-Strauss.
They keep my mind on target—story, myth, how the brain works.
What is the best advice you've
ever received?
Thom Gunn, the poet who wrote My Sad Captains told me once, when I was
imitating every poet who ever went before me, that if I lived in another man’s
universe it would always be smaller than the one I could create myself. That
bit of advice kick started my creative writing mind. I took it to mean that I
should build on the past, stand on the shoulders of giants but not let them
limit who and what I could be.
If you could have coffee with
anyone (living or dead, real or fictional), who would it be and why?
Hmm. I wrote a poem a while ago,
“Chief Architects of the Modern World” that begins:
These are the big guys
The big guys who figured it all out
Figured out what glues one rock to the planet
Figured out why the Milky Way spins
Through time and space leaving no trail
The “Big guys” I refer to are
Archimedes, Newton, and Einstein. So I guess my answer would be Archimedes. He
was so close to understanding integral and differential calculus that if the
Romans hadn’t killed him, Columbus probably would have flown to the New World.
I’d like to talk to Archimedes, to have him tell me what he was thinking.
What are your top three favorite
books and why?
They’re not all novels, if that’s
what you mean but right now I’m thinking a lot about Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale. Atwood is a seer who reads right into the
heart of civilization. I also spend a lot of time in Claude
Levi-Strauss’s Mythologiques because
a writer needs to have a solid understanding of anthropology and myth. Finally,
Lynn Margulis’s Acquiring Genomes is
a terrific book that helps me see how Life (with a capital L) isn’t defined
solely as human. Very humbling to think that the bacteria in your body have
been there from the beginning.
What was your favorite book as a
child and why?
To be honest with you, I don’t
remember any books from my childhood. Music was my art from the time I was 5. I
played the piano early but I don’t remember learning to read either words or
music. My reading life really didn’t start until I was in high school where I
discovered Albert Camus’s The Stranger and
Nietzsche’s Beyond Good and Evil. Of
course I didn’t understand Camus, Nietzsche or Existentialism until later, but
they were foundation authors for me.
What would you say is your most
interesting writing quirk?
Quirk? Being a writer is quirky in a
culture that worships glitz and media superstars. You think about it—sitting
alone in a room with your only friend a computer and a printer stirring up
worlds of imaginary creatures and making them talk. Yeah. Being a writer is
about as quirky as it gets.
Do you write full-time or
part-time?
My writing consumes my life so I
guess I’ll say full-time. By that I mean my days are structured and organized
around writing. Just about everything I do feeds into the writing. You can’t
spend twenty hours a day at it because you have to eat and shop and even
sometimes talk to other people—my wife insists on having dinner together every
night.
If you could do anything in the
world, what would it be and why?
Tough question because it’s a big
wide world full of all kinds of challenges. Right now the practical thing would
be to find a way to think books into existence without having to write them on
a machine.
What is the craziest thing you
ever did? This could be as a writer or any other time in your life.
A few years ago I sold everything I
owned and ran off to South America for a year. I traveled with a Chilean ex-pat,
Ramon Barrientos. We lived “off the land” so to speak because Ramon was a
super-psychopathic con-man. He taught me a lot about lying and cheating and
using people and all of that comes into my work. Without Ramon and that year in
a time of violence, my writing would, more than likely, be pretty bland.
Did you feel like a celebrity
when you held your first published book?
No. Not at all. My first book was an
experimental novel called The Stolen
House. It was published by Pig Iron Press in the early days of the small press
revolution. We wanted to be as subversive as possible in the process of
building what was called the “counter-culture” so celebrity was the farthest
thing from my mind. Revolution and redefinition of art and writing were the
goals. We didn’t succeed in wiping out popular culture but Pig Iron Press still
lives. For several years, I wrote a fifty page novella every three months for
Pig Iron.
If you could have a star on
Hollywood Blvd, who would you want to have your star by? This can be an actual
star on Hollywood Blvd. or someone you just admire.
I don’t know if Hampton Fancher, who
wrote the screenplay for Bladerunner,
has a star there, but if he does, I’d like to share space with him. In fact, I
wouldn’t mind just breathing the air Fancher breathes for a while because some
of that genius has to be in the breathing.
Is there anything in your life
you wish you could do over and why?
No. I am the result of all my
mistakes. Here I am. I know I can’t rewrite my past, but I can use all of my
misdirections to create fiction that has some meaning. I think the quest for
meaning is the deepest human drive. In the end, you want to be more than just
meat and bone. You want to have a legacy. I think that’s why we have children.
Writers have books.
Who has been your biggest
support or inspiration?
Support: My wife. Without her, I
couldn’t do what I do. She’s a world class quilter—you can see her work at http://helenremick.com –who understands
obsession, compulsion, and the drive to perfection. We co-exist in a world of
art and artists.
Inspiration: M.C. Escher, the man
who taught us to see backwards—all those woodcuts were made in mirror image.
Christine de Pisan, a poet working to find a place in a man’s world. Jack
Moodey, a poet. I once asked Moodey if he’d ever written an epic. His answer:
“Six lines or eight?” If that’s not a treatise on art, I don’t know what is. I
can’t forget Natalie Goldberg and Robert J Ray. Natalie opens doors to the
gifts of the unconscious and shows you it’s good to go deep. Bob Ray is a
genius who understands the structure of story in ways no one else ever has.
From these people, I derive not just inspiration, but a gentle quieting of the
noise in the world. In the quiet, you find truth.
Could you share about any
current writing projects?
I’m deep into The California Quartet right
now. Two novels, The Deification and Valley
Boy are already out. I’m working with my publisher on the next two—The Book of Changes and Trio of Lost Souls. I like to work on
multiple pieces so I’m also writing the back story for a novel with the working
title Prisons of Desire. I know
nothing about it yet, and the characters aren’t talking to me.
What would be the best way for
readers to contact you?
I keep a couple of blogs and
websites. http://jackremick.com is my
“author site” with blurbs about all my novels. There’s an email connection on
that page but you can reach me at jackremick@gmail.com.
In addition, Bob Ray and I run http://bobandjackswritingblog.com.
This blog holds everything I know about writing. It’s there for the taking if
anyone wants to sample it. The latest posts are “Writing Tips for the Commited
Novelist” and “ Story Development.” Bob Ray is a successful mystery novelist
who knows all the secrets and is willing to share them.
Where can people find your books?
My publisher is Coffetown Press. All
my novels are up on amazon.com as well as Barnes & Noble. There’s also a
list of e-books on Smashwords.
Is there anything else you'd
like to share?
The World of Ink Network is
touring my contemporary women’s literary novel, Gabriela and The Widow published by
Coffeetown Press throughout January and February 2013.
About the Book:
Through the intimate bond of a companion and
benefactor, Gabriela reconciles the painful experiences of her youth as she is
reshaped by the Widow, La Viuda. Together, day after day, night after night, La
Viuda immerses Gabriela in lists, boxes, places, times, objects, photos, and
stories, captivating and life-changing stories. It seems Gabriela is not
just hired to cook and clean; she has been chosen to curate La Viuda’s mementos
while taking care of the old woman’s failing health. “As you grow thick, I
grow thin,” says the widow, portending the secret of immortality that will
overtake both women.
ISBN: 978-1-60381-147-7
Publication Date: January 15, 2013
Places available for sale:
Gabriela and The Widow
is currently available for pre-order on Amazon.com. After January 15, 2013,
it will also be available in multiple eBook and 6x9 trade paperback editions on
BN.com, the European Amazons and Amazon Japan.
Wholesale orders can be placed through info@coffeetownpress.com Baker & Taylor or Ingram. Libraries can
also purchase books through Follett Library Resources or Midwest Library
Service.
You can find out more about Jack Remick, his books and World
of Ink Author/Book Tour at http://tinyurl.com/akw7kk6
Follow Jack Remick at
Author page: http://jackremick.com
Twitter: @jackremick
Publisher Website: http://CoffeetownPress.com
To learn more about the World of Ink Tours visit http://worldofinknetwork.com
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